tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8513212960307829243.post5576811663766269387..comments2023-06-04T08:54:06.245-04:00Comments on I Want to Live my Life Inspired: Trip With MeCatiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05786979230426186539noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8513212960307829243.post-37116831775116932332010-03-15T23:11:25.771-04:002010-03-15T23:11:25.771-04:00This was a really powerful poem, and extremely cre...This was a really powerful poem, and extremely creative as well. <br />"You wanted everything<br />And I was up for the taking<br />So you took<br />And you took<br />And you took<br />From me"<br /><br />I thought this was really painful but really honest as well. Its like a voice speaking from deep deep within the heart&soul of someone who has been abused, things that one feels everyday but may not even think or feel able to say. <br /><br />"And sometimes<br />Sometimes<br />I turn the wrong way<br />And your swirling colors come back to me<br />With one swift crack of my back<br />Your acid takes me<br />Again"<br /><br />How powerful the memory is, and how terrible it is when we are hurt so badly that our life after for a long time becomes colored by what happened then...<br /><br />"And putting too much make up on me<br />So no would know<br />That your children were older<br />Than me"<br /><br />I have rarely read something more honest and painful than this (and only really in your writings :) )...I feel at a loss of what to say...-mnoreply@blogger.com